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Broadcast: January 23, 2011

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    This poem tells a story about a miner who just couldn't stop. Sometimes writing stories feels that way. Just one more line, one more word and then I'll stop. Instead we keep on digging — for what? See if you can tell.

CHILLY MCGEE

Back up in the mountains where the miners dig their gold; 
   this time of year it's always unbelievably cold. 

The snow piles up on every rock and fence post top; 
   
once that snow starts falling, it never seems to stop.

And digging near Chilly Creek in a place that no one could see; 
   
was a miner from the flatlands whose name was Albert Chilly McGee.

He dug the gold in summer and he mined the ore all spring; 
   
and there wasn't a beautiful day in autumn that he didn't make his shovel sing. 

But during the freeze of winter when the cold was never ending, 
   
the miner wrote a letter he would very soon be sending. 

"For my lovely sweetheart, with all my love from me," 
   
Wrote the fateful miner name Albert Chilly McGee.

He wrote a love-filled letter and sealed it with a kiss;
   
and then he looked around at all the things that he would miss. 

For the miner was now frozen from his toes up to his head;
   
and although he didn't know it, he was already dead. 

But he kept right on a-working as cold as he could be;
   
he was a ghost miner now, Albert Chilly McGee.

The love of gold still drives him to work the mine each day;
   
to anyone who wanders up there, Here's a few words you should pray: 

"I'm thankful for the sunrise and the warmth that it still brings
   
I'm thankful for a fire and other wonderfully hot things.

For in that mine near Chilly Creek I'm glad it isn't me; 
   
Digging a frozen, golden grave is Albert Chilly McGee."

The End

second thoughts
    If you've ever spent a long, cold night waiting for the sun to rise then maybe you'll understand this poem. Sometimes that sunrise brings only the promise of warmth but doesn't exactly deliver. I think that's the way Chilly McGee fills.
    Thanks for reading this little poem. Now sit down and write your own!

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